Feed Back

This is some of the feedback done by our class mates, we all sat infront of the projector and each had a piece of paper to put our constructive criticism on. This was very useful for us in terms of finding out what other people thought, but it we also found out alot. Personally I saw things that I did not see when the video was in final cut, but when you actually sit there and watch your video it is quite clear what needed working on. This is meant that the feedback we got we agreed with, but there were some elements that we did not pick up on.

• People picked up on the miming was out of sync in some stages

•  Some our shots were held for to long

• Some shots were too dark

• We needed a stronger performance, singing and playing the guitar with more vigour 

• The story was not clear

• Our artist looks a little bored